Charlie II

This is so well-deserved! Congratulations! :wink:

Charlie II Awww yeah! 8) I did use the "Caps Lock" key and the more-precise inside edge of my elbow though. Is this considered cheating?

That brings me up-to-date! Next, please! :D

Hey Azila -- here's my opinion! :) Dialogue This is generally good, especially this sentence: "Well, just watch out—that's quite a storm that's brewing.". It sounds natural and human, unlike ...

Hello Jas (and Tori!) -- I got your PM! :wink: As this is so short I think I'll just write what I feel about it rather than try and divide ...

Oh hello hipster! :wink: Perspective You've got the "teenage" part of the perspective down perfectly. I like the observations about the car and references to the instructor's car, etc. Furthermore ...

My goodness, Jas. I don't think one "like" button is enough. Word choice You've got a great grasp of the right words to use -- really the main thing I'd ...

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Nick | ???? Awake, dear heart, awake. Thou hast slept well. As soon as Nick opened his eyes he realised he was dead. The pain had ended. The water had ...

Regarding cows Of all the bovine treats you see, Milk seems the strangest one to me. A white emulsion -- packed with fat! -- What sort of person looks at ...

Hello, my name is Charlie and I think I'm a pretty PUN -ny guy.

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j4mc0j86516z Oh dear Naturalistic and Kinaestheic... That doesn't bode well for practical Chemistry!

Hello again WaitingForLife. This was the piece I was originally going to review before I got distracted by the link at the top. :wink: Sully Kale Like Captaindomdude said, he's ...

Hello WaitingForLife -- here we go, I guess: Originality I'd like to start by saying I *love* your unique goblins. In fact there's a lot about this piece which is ...